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GCSE English Concerns & Advice

AQA English Language Paper 2 Section A – Practice Resource

This resource provides a sample non-fiction text and exam-style Questions 1–4 for AQA English Language Paper 2 Section A. The content is inspired by real student conversations about GCSE English Language and Literature tutoring. Model answers and annotated explanations are included for each question. Use this as a practice exercise to understand how to approach each question type. All examples are in clear British English.

Source A (2025): Online Post by a GCSE Student

 

The following is a post by a Year 11 student on an online forum, seeking advice about GCSE English preparation.

Hi everyone,

I’m feeling really confused and stressed about my English studies. Back in primary school and during my 11+ exam prep, I actually did fine in creative writing – I loved making up stories. But now at GCSE level I have no clue how to improve my creative writing or what the examiners want. It’s like what worked for 11+ just isn’t enough for GCSE.

And don’t get me started on poetry – I so don’t get it. We have to analyse all these poems and find techniques and meanings. I try, but most of the time I just end up thinking “What on earth does this poem even mean?” I never had to do this kind of analysis in Year 6, so maybe that’s why I’m struggling now.

I’ve bought those CGP revision guides (the ones with the jokes) and a York Notes book for An Inspector Calls because my teacher said they’d help. They do have all the info – themes, quotes, and some funny bits – but I’m not sure if I’m actually using them effectively. Am I supposed to just read them and remember everything? I sometimes feel like I’m only reading summaries and not improving my own writing or analysis skills. Also, I’ve done a couple of past papers for English Language, but I’m not sure if I should do more, or focus on revising content, or what. I worry I might run out of past papers to do!

Some of my friends go to a tutoring centre where they do group tutoring sessions, and a couple of others have one-on-one tutors. My parents offered to get me a tutor as well, but I’m torn. Are group classes actually helpful since you can share ideas, or would 1-on-1 tutoring be better for focusing on my weak spots (like giving me personal feedback on my essays)? I don’t want my parents to spend money for nothing. Also, part of me wonders if I should be able to do it on my own with the resources I have.

Overall, I really want to get a top grade in English (like a 7, 8 or hopefully 9), but right now my confidence is low. I feel overwhelmed and don’t know where to start to properly improve. Any advice would be greatly appreciated! 🙏

    — A Confused GCSE Student

Source B (2025): Response on a Tutoring Advice Blog

The following text is an answer from an English tutor in a study advice blog, responding to the student’s concerns.

Dear Confused GCSE Student,

 

Thank you for your message. Firstly, don’t panic – feeling overwhelmed in Year 11 is very common, and the fact that you’re seeking help shows you’re determined to improve. I’m an English tutor, and I’ve advised many GCSE students with the same concerns you have. Let me address each of your points.

Creative Writing: You’re right that what worked at 11+ might not automatically excel at GCSE. The GCSE creative writing tasks do expect a bit more depth and control – but don’t worry, you can get there with practice. Remember, even professional writers improve by practising regularly. Try this: write short pieces (e.g. descriptions of a scene or a short story opening) and ask someone to give you feedback on them – maybe an English teacher or tutor. Then practise rewriting based on that feedback. This kind of practice-feedback loop is one of the most effective ways to improve any skill. In fact, educational research shows that “meaningful feedback” combined with deliberate practice leads to significant improvement. At 11+ you might have relied on natural creativity, but at GCSE you should practise specific techniques – for example, focus on crafting vivid descriptions, varied sentences, and clear structure. Over time, these elements will become easier for you as your skills strengthen with deliberate practice.

Poetry Analysis: Many students find poetry analysis baffling at first – you’re not alone. You’re dealing with complex poems now, whereas in primary school you likely didn’t do this at all. Start by reading a poem twice. On the first read, just get the general idea. On the second, annotate it: underline interesting words or phrases, and jot down any meaning or feeling you get from them. Look for a few key poetic techniques (like metaphors, alliteration, or enjambment) and ask yourself, why did the poet use this? What effect does it have? It can help to use a simple formula: Point, Evidence, Explanation – e.g. “The poet compares life to a journey (‘road’ metaphor) – this suggests that …”. You might also try writing brief paragraph responses to single questions about a poem and get feedback on those. Over time, as you practice, you’ll start seeing common techniques and gaining confidence. It’s a bit like solving a puzzle; the more poems you tackle, the more patterns you’ll notice.

Using CGP Guides and York Notes: These are great resources, but you’re correct that you shouldn’t just read them passively. CGP guides are written in a fun, colloquial style (with jokes) to make facts easy to digest. York Notes are very useful for literature: they give you the “bare bones” of the themes, characters and context for texts. To use them effectively, do active tasks: for example, after reading a chapter summary or analysis in York Notes, pause and test yourself – can you explain back the key theme or write a few sentences about a character without looking? Or, use the CGP guide’s quiz questions if they have any. When you read a sample analysis in the guide, highlight phrases you find insightful, then see if you can apply that style to a different chapter or poem. Don’t rely on them exclusively – use them to support your own notes and understanding. They’re best for clarifying points you find tricky and for quick revision of facts and quotes. Think of revision guides as maps: they show you the direction, but you have to walk the journey yourself (by doing practice questions and writing tasks).

Past Papers: It’s excellent that you’ve done a couple of past papers already. Working through past exam questions is one of the best ways to prepare. You asked how many to do – there’s no magic number, but aim to do them regularly under timed conditions (like a real exam). After doing a paper, always review it: use the marking scheme or examiner reports if available, or ask a teacher to mark it, so you can learn from any mistakes. If you run out of past papers from your exam board, you can use papers from other boards or older exams – the practice of writing under time pressure and answering in the correct format is still valuable. Remember, it’s not just about quantity of papers, but quality of reflection: doing ten papers without reviewing is less useful than doing five papers and carefully learning from each one. So, continue doing them, and track your progress – you’ll likely see your scores improve as you incorporate the feedback into your next attempts.

Group vs One-on-One Tutoring: This is a great question. Both formats can be effective, but in different ways. Group tutoring classes can be helpful because you can learn from peers, discuss ideas together (for example, everyone might share interpretations of a poem), and you might feel reassured that others have similar questions. It’s often a bit cheaper too. However, the downside is the tutor’s attention is split among the group. With one-on-one tutoring, you get personalised attention – the tutor can focus entirely on your needs. If you struggle with, say, structuring your creative writing, a one-on-one tutor can spend a whole session just helping you plan and improve a story, giving you targeted feedback. Research indicates that students can make more progress with one-on-one support due to this personalisation, but group sessions can still boost understanding, especially for general topics, and can motivate you through friendly competition and collaboration with others. Consider your own learning style: if you’re very shy or need a lot of individual feedback, a private tutor might be best. If you like discussion and bouncing ideas off others, a small group could be enjoyable. Also, remember there are other options: asking your school teacher for extra help, or even online forums (like the one you posted on!) for specific questions. Many students succeed without private tutors, but if you feel really stuck, a tutor can provide a structured boost. Perhaps you could try a couple of group sessions first (since your friends are in them — it might be encouraging) and see how it goes. Alternatively, some tutors offer a trial one-on-one session. Either way, the key is how you use the help: whether group or solo, make sure you actively engage, do any practice tasks they set, and ask questions on anything you don’t understand.

Next Steps & Encouragement: You’ve got a lot of resources and options – which is great news! The trick now is to use them deliberately. Make a simple plan: for example, dedicate one afternoon a week to just writing practice (a story or essay) and getting feedback on it, another session to literature revision (using York Notes or school notes to create mind-maps of themes), etc. Mix it up so you don’t get bored: one day do a past paper question, another day focus on poetry analysis practice. Over the weeks, this kind of varied practice will build your skills. It’s a bit like training for a sport or learning an instrument – consistent, focused practice beats last-minute cramming.

Finally, believe in yourself. The fact that you care this much means you will improve. Every student feels unsure at some point, but those who keep working and learning from feedback end up achieving great results. You mentioned your confidence is low now – but confidence comes with familiarity and success over time. So, take it step by step. Celebrate small wins (like when a poem starts to make sense, or when your practice story gets a bit better than the last one). Your target grades (7, 8, 9) are within reach if you stay consistent.

You’ve got this! Keep practising, and don’t hesitate to reach out for help from teachers or friends when you need it. Wishing you the very best of luck in your GCSE English.

Sincerely,

A Helpful English Tutor and Coach 🎓

Exam-Style Questions and Model Answers

Get to Know The Assessment Objectives

Below are four exam-style questions based on Sources A and B, following the AQA English Language Paper 2 Section A format. Read each question carefully, noting whether it requires using Source A, Source B, or both. After attempting an answer, check the Model Answer provided and read the Walkthrough explanation to understand how to achieve full marks.

Question 1 (4 marks)

Read again Source A (the student’s forum post). List four statements below which are TRUE according to Source A.
Shade the circles of the four true statements. (In an exam, you would mark these on the answer sheet.)

A. The student finds creative writing more difficult at GCSE level than it was at 11+.
B. The student has already hired a private tutor for English.
C. The student feels unsure how to use revision guides effectively.
D. The student never did well in creative writing during primary school.
E. The student’s friends attend group tutoring sessions for GCSE preparation.
F. The student is very confident about analysing poetry for the exam.
G. The student is aiming to achieve a high grade (7–9) in GCSE English.
H. The student has completed every past paper available for English Language.

Question 2 (8 marks)

You need to refer to both Source A and Source B for this question.

Use details from both sources to summarise the differences between the challenges the student faces in Source A and the guidance given by the tutor in Source B.

Model Answer (Q2)

Question 3 (12 marks)

You now need to refer only to Source B (the tutor’s advice).

How does the writer of Source B use language to advise and reassure the student?

You could include the writer’s tone, choice of words and phrases, and any language techniques used to offer advice or comfort. (12 marks)

Model Answer (Q3)

Question 4 (16 marks)

For this question, you need to refer to both Source A and Source B.

Compare how the writers present their attitudes towards GCSE English study and support in the two texts.

In your answer, you should compare:

  • the writers’ viewpoints and attitudes (what each writer thinks or feels about GCSE study and getting help)

  • the methods the writers use to convey those attitudes.

Support your answer with evidence from both texts. (16 marks)

Model Answer (Q4)

Question 5 (40 marks)

 

“Some students think private tutoring gives unfair advantages. Others say tutoring is necessary when schools cannot meet everyone’s learning needs.”

Write an article for a school magazine in which you explain your views on this issue.

In your article, you should:

  • present a convincing argument

  • support your ideas with relevant evidence or examples

  • engage your reader

You are reminded of the need to plan your answer.

(24 marks for content and organisation, 16 marks for technical accuracy)

Model Answer (Q5)
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